Midterm Critique

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show box in dark

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construction

Feedback:

The box issue: why build this box, why use the frame?

The darkness issue: all the details be vanished in the dark space, audience can not see the book hanging in the box. (Lighting design? or something else.)

The narrative issue: storytelling unfinished.

The sound issue: too quiet. Is it necessary to add a sound?

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